She swayed frightfully
Against the current
That appeared to be the hand
She swayed frightfully
Against the current
That appeared to be the hand
Publishing three times a year in January, May and September and entering its 7th year of publication, A-Minor is a literary gem that has an air of humility I can only describe as being quietly content.
Founder Nicolette Wong is the Hong-Kong-based editor-in-chief of the publication as well as A-Minor Press, a notable press that publishes chapbooks and poetry collections. Ms. Wong is also a dancer, writer and translator. Per her bio, she has recently been “a recipient of a Hong Kong Arts Development Council Project Grant (Literary Arts), and has been featured at the Hong Kong Book Fair and Hong Kong International Literary Festival.”
A-Minor features poetry, prose, short fiction and artwork. Guidelines for submissions are standard. They ask that you submit to one category only for now, submissions are received via email. No fee is required. They welcome collaborations of artwork paired with poetry/prose. They are partial to “surrealist, experimental and quirky writing. For poetry, (they) lean toward the lyrical, eccentric, ambivalent and wildly imaginative.” Researching back issues is always a good idea to see editor preferences and to ensure the work you submit is a good fit with this literary forum.
In November of 2016, A-Minor received a great shout out from BOOKFOX which is a website “designed to help writers get from the shoebox of rejections to (their) dream publication.” BOOKFOX listed them as one of “30 Small but Awesome Online Literary Magazines.” With more than 100,000 monthly visitors to their page I have no doubt that A-Minor traffic will increase given this recognition.
While they do have a Facebook and twitter page, they are not routinely active on either account. As a proponent of keeping your audience engaged through social media, I found this to be unfortunate. Nevertheless, I always believe in following any publication you regularly read or submit to so click that FOLLOW button.
A-Minor is your average online publication. The site is user-friendly, clean and visually soft on the eyes. Their list of contributors is extensive and inclusive of everyone from international beginning writers/artists to seasoned published ones. At least a dozen names were writers I actively follow on Twitter and are well-known for their publications in other print and/or online literary magazines. My notable favorite bio was this one:
Jarrid Deaton lives in Eastern Kentucky. He once painted his face in blood during a softball game.
Not sure if I liked it due to its simplicity or clear commitment to the sport. Either way it intrigued me enough to click on his name and check out his contribution to the site. I wasn’t disappointed. His work was archived but it was worth the search. If I am not mistaken he was published in the magazines inaugural issue in June of 2010. His story, entitled “Answer for Red Question,” was a well-crafted piece that caused me to scramble for more of his work and is also a great example of the kind of poetry/prose the editor is looking for. The piece is a smart, quirky and slightly dark, soul-searching work of exceptional prose.
The magazine’s fall issue, published in September 2016, features three works of poetry, two prose pieces, two modern art contributions (three if you include the cover art which was my favorite) and two pieces I believe fall under the category of short fiction. Eight in total, which appears to be the norm except for their anniversary issues which have, on average, four or five additional submissions.
The standout poem, for me, was “Trail Mountain” by Andres Rojas. This piece is exceptional in its imagery and use of language. It is if he pulled his word choices right out of Emily Dickinson’s Lexicon. His two stanzas,
as the rough-winged swallows
buzzing the rhododendrons,
not at play, hunters on the fly
as are we all, each viridescent laurel
are not only coupled brilliantly, they sing, stitching this into a soliloquy that guides the reader down the trail with all the expectations and hope intended.
Hamline University MFA student, Nicola Koh, also contributed a daring piece to this issue entitled The Bride of Christ. This work of fiction draws the reader in from its prefacing quote:
And I saw a new heaven
and a new earth:
for the first heaven
and the first earth
were passed away;
and there was
-John of Patmos
The quote, along with the enticing title, had me hooked to read on and read on I did (twice). Koh weaves a story that is sprinkled with reality, faith and juxta positioned with the writers hope in God’s existence despite current circumstances the main character shares with anyone who will listen. The ship she sets sail on is representative of Heaven, but not the definitive one we imagine. One where the wrong people sit in the highest chair in disregard of danger (the devil in the form of black mountains) that looms across the unbalanced sea. Koh also quietly sews in the issue of gender roles in a way that doesn’t force the notion down your throat but asks you to consider what society is suppressing. A true treasure of a choice for publication and set appropriately as the last tale of the magazine because you’ll need time to process what you have read. A sign of a well-crafted write.
In direct contradiction to some of the magazine’s weaker stories, “This House,” by Nicholas Rys left me breathless. This story moved with emotion fueled waves of imagination entangled with harsh realities. The imagery within this prose is climatic. Mr. Rys pulled me right along with him “down hallways” over the “pulse carpet blood”. I take his hand willingly, and together we explore each nuance of the house with hopeful eyes despite its apparent decay. I, too, am “tingling with electricity” as I watch the mind unfold with the possibilities within the walls of This House.
Despite enjoying most of the work of the contributing artists and writers, I am going to have to give A-Minor three stars out of five, which is hard. I just did not get the “wow” factor I think online magazines need to keep their readers returning. Unlike print magazines, online literary sites need to be sought out by the reader. They are not delivered by post; they are delivered by emails that can be easily skipped over or deleted if the subscriber isn’t getting substance from it. Other than the cover, the artwork was simplistic and the selected contributions, while many I enjoyed a great deal, didn’t fit together, offering an issue that seemed to be like a puzzle missing several pieces.
Additionally, as an online journal, engaging your online audience through Facebook and Twitter is essential to successfully draw in new readers and keep the ones your already have. Not to mention your contributors, who I feel, deserve invested time in promoting their work through social media sources. As a former social media specialist, I highly recommend this for all literary magazines, print or online. In fact, I go out of my way to ensure that the magazines and writers know I am reviewing them. I seek them out, follow them, engage them. This promotes healthy camaraderie within the writing community that relies heavily on encouragement.
Poetry by Grace Black
Createspace, February 01, 2017
ISBN : 9781542716666
Available on Amazon $8.95
Grace Black’s second book of poetry, Love, Ink, & Sin, is a moving collection of remarkable, well crafted poetry and prose that awakens the weary from slumber and swells the heart with a provacative tale of a love lost and a heart-moving to the mend.
This collection is divided into three sections, Lie of Love, Lay with Love and Lain for Love. Lie of Love introduces the reader–welcomes them with tantalizing stanza’s like,
and night-blue passion
licked our naked hips
Midnight in my arms
you were my
Powerful imagery of a love igniting sets the stage of this first set of poems/prose. An invitation to glimpse inside the intimacy of a fresh romance. Ms. Black chooses her words with care and reveals a tender, yet explosive exchange between lovers. With each turn of the page the reader falls slowly into the well of their love with its ebb and flow, reaching a height so unimaginable it begs to answer the ever curious question, “Is this love?” or as the title of this chapter suggests, is it a “Lie of Love? ”
Lay with Love, the second “chapter” of this collection, takes the readers captured heart and pulls them all the way in. Welcoming them into a private, secret place reserved only for lovers. She masterfully uncovers an erupting sadness enveloping within the walls of the relationship they thought was so carefully constructed. Take deliberate consideration of this stanza, its inference subtle while at the same time bold in its hint,
His hands painted intimacy
on the canvas of my flesh,
but his insecurites sank
their teeth into survival
and dawn came again
in the same hue as yesterday,
and the day before,
and the day before that
It’s a loney hue; the color of regret.
The tide is turning, as relationships often do, despite the intensity held within that first wave as it crashed upon the beach. Sadness slips in as words lie like lovers on wrinkled sheets within the written pages that come next. The reader is all in now, feeling almost voyeuristic, as the tension builds to a climax, then a page is turned and there it is, the beginning of the final set of poems, Lain for Love, and you read,
This empty air
contains all the missing
Stopped by the words and remembering to breathe, a hesitation to turn the page occurs. The need for a commercial break becomes apparent as the reader is spent but at the same time so intrigued they push forward with an anxiety so thick the ends of their fingers tingle and their heart lurches.
The concluding prose is so brilliantly laced together with desire, regret, loss and most profoundly…rememberance. It is indescribable, truly. You must read it yourself, I don’t dare rush the words or feelings on your behalf, you must experience it solely.
Without question, the following stanza, for me, was the most compelling.
Graphic marrow of your pain
met with mine
and this reverberant laughter
licked the slow smoke skies
and the rain fell through me
as a sluice to skin and where
I now begin-
This mingling of poetry and prose spread across ninety-nine clean pages is a narrative stitched together so intensely you will find yourself breathless as the end draws near. Even the concluding index appears to be in poetic meter.
Clearly a writer who pours her soul into each and every effort she puts to print, Grace Black is definitely one to watch in 2017.
*An additional note on the book as a whole is the beauty in its utter simplicity. Almost in contrast to love itself, the publication is strictly black and white whereas love is never that simple. The choice to align left, align right and center the typeset on occasional pages is a bold statement and is a visual descriptive of the notion that often love truly is an unpredictable balance of ‘if only’s’ and ‘what if’s’ for so many.
Stand firm. Do not let the darts of others hit their mark.
Originally posted on March 21, 2016 at Mothers Always Write
Like a Penny
We entered the room in parade formation,
our gait slow and rehearsed.
The silence of the ventilator paralyzes me.
Visible is the incubator, it sits empty.
The revelation removes the air from my body,
my bones dissolve. I am offered a metal chair.
Denial embeds itself firmly
within the farthest recesses of thought,
helping my mind move forward.
Various people collect around me, but they
arrived too late to bar the door from dread.
Fear followed their path through the entrance,
pushing promise aside, disregarding
my pleas to stay at bay.
And, as if fear itself was
a relation, it settled in to observe me,
expecting me to turn and nod.
Reality moved into the sterile, hushed room next,
without invitation or welcome,
its heavy hand on my shoulder.
The last shards of hope strangled by its presence,
slowly building to suffocate me
with a clench that refused to loosen.
A loved one squeezed my hand but only
my heart felt the grip.
Nestled within my mind
I concealed a scream that was
suppressed by news not yet broken.
And like a penny on the tracks
I lost my shape
as fear morphed into
despair and pushed inside the room.
Without a chance to inhale
the Doctor’s voice spilled into the air.
His gentle whisper sliced my reality
with the words,
She is no longer
and like that penny,
I felt worthless.
Raw wounds exposed guilt of ending a pain, not of flesh but separated existence stitched together w/ faulty paper clips & unimaginable glue.
Excited to share with you my recent publication in the highly praised literary magazine,
Hard earned salary
Behind a desk
Time out of mind
One hotel key
Having fun now
Every other weekend
Heart attack pending
Upper lip sweat
Top drawer left
Drink anxiety wisely sir
Don’t spill it
You bought it
Stoned by words
farfetched and thrown
against brick walls
that crumble with the
impact of their
spewed with filthy
visibility of these
that litter your way
and expose them
as they sit at the curb.
Midway along the journey of our life, I woke to find myself in a dark wood
Weary from misadventures lay her pen, graceless within the folds of linen as the circus came into view. #fieryverse #TheSecretLifeOfEmily