No Escape
Walking Slowly…
Fearing Nothing…
Eyes are Wide…
Same old Story…
World of Lies…
No Escape…
Pale Sunlight…
Livid Moonlight…
Burning Stars…
Turn to Ashes…
Broken Down…
Given Up…
Sea of Anger…
No Escape…
Looking Back…
Not so Bad…
Seeing Life…
Through new Mind…
Wish I hadn’t…
Thought so Bad…
Of Myself…
And my Friends…
New Beginnings…
And Old Ties…
I will take Them…
Till I die…
No Escape…
From this Pain…
From this Joy…
Without you…
I am Lost…
Come back to Me…
From where you’ve gone…
No Escape…
*This is a poem done by my teenage son. He is quite the writer, published before me even!! He is letting me use this
for Rally 48! He would love your input!
-Poetryroad
“Encouragement lifts the heart of a novice writer”
I am blown away by all the great comments and The Perfect Poet Award!
Thank you!
-son of Poetryroad
My son would like to nominate: http://nadirafromkannur.wordpress.com/
poetryroad 
mind blowing emotion, thanks for sharing.
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It has a very nice, easy to read, rhythm. Your son did a good job.
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I think it’s great. He should continue submitting here. I’d love to see more of his writing.
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When you love someone, you want to share your joys, your hopes, and your sorrows with them. It’s evident. As each day passes, there’s a void . . . there’s no escape. Excellent poem. Thank you!
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I will pass on your kind words!
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Pale Sunlight…
Livid Moonlight…
Burning Stars
….absolutely bautiful 🙂
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Thanks so much!
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Oh wow your son is very talented!
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Just a teenager? He is good at this. Please tell him to continue writing poetry. I like the way the “No escape” is repeated at different turns of the poem depicting different emotions…of regret, of remorse, of resignation and even of hope.
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Yes! Not yet 17! Me telling him he has talent is different so he will be so pleased by the positive response. Thanks you!
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Amazing power at the still tender age of 17 … wait until the world opens a wider door to him with age … look forward to more of his sharing. Well done!!
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Thanks!!
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Great poem! Got a strange feeling after readin this! Thanks for sharing
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that is nice, it’s binding, no escape just reminds me every time, just in case I don’t forget.
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an explosion of weary thoughts! it’s brilliant!
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Thanks!
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This poem is awesome, have read it a few times now
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love it, flowing ryhmes (:
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He is very talented… he should continue…
Seeing Life…
Through new Mind… (suggestion – to use Through New Eyes)
Good use of No escape at the start and end ~
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This is really a great poem. I like the way you layed out the lines. It made me want to keep reading it. Much anticipation!
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very good poem! : )
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Really good
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And im only 13 and doing poems 🙂
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Thanks for your kind comment! Only 13 and doing poems that is awesome! I would love to read some of them. Heading over to your site now!!!
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