No Escape

No Escape

Walking Slowly…

Fearing Nothing…

Eyes are Wide…

Same old Story…

World of Lies…

No Escape…

Pale Sunlight…

Livid Moonlight…

Burning Stars…

Turn to Ashes…

Broken Down…

Given Up…

Sea of Anger…

No Escape…

Looking Back…

Not so Bad…

Seeing Life…

Through new Mind…

Wish I hadn’t…

Thought so Bad…

Of Myself…

And my Friends…

New Beginnings…

And Old Ties…

I will take Them…

Till I die…

No Escape…

From this Pain…

From this Joy…

Without you…

I am Lost…

Come back to Me…

From where you’ve gone…

No Escape…

*This is a poem done by my teenage son.  He is quite the writer, published before me even!!  He is letting me use this

for Rally 48!  He would love your input!

-Poetryroad

“Encouragement lifts the heart of a novice writer”

I am blown away by all the great comments and The Perfect Poet Award!

Thank you!

-son of Poetryroad

My son would like to nominate:  http://nadirafromkannur.wordpress.com/

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24 thoughts on “No Escape

  1. When you love someone, you want to share your joys, your hopes, and your sorrows with them. It’s evident. As each day passes, there’s a void . . . there’s no escape. Excellent poem. Thank you!

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  2. Just a teenager? He is good at this. Please tell him to continue writing poetry. I like the way the “No escape” is repeated at different turns of the poem depicting different emotions…of regret, of remorse, of resignation and even of hope.

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  3. He is very talented… he should continue…

    Seeing Life…

    Through new Mind… (suggestion – to use Through New Eyes)

    Good use of No escape at the start and end ~

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